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First Draft:The future car.

Hover Car

            In my opinion.I want to future car that environmental use magnetic energy to people. The name of this car is Hover.It has passenger seat shaped disc,2 seat,sphere and smaller car.It use magnetic energy,devoid of noise and air pollution,The road run of have release magnetic field high-speed train technology,Maglev. It can faster fluent driver.I think the car will cost 2 million.I am trust Volkswagen that Hover car because launch event "Auto china 2012" have a design development 5 year.May be in future practical use. 

Reference
Volkswagen,H.(2012).Innovation of vehicles devoid wheel driven floating.Retrieved from https://www.sentangsedtee.com/news_detail.php?rich_id=2462

Hover Car

            In my opinion.I want to future car that environmental. The name of this car is Hover.It has passenger seat shaped disc,2 seat, sphere and smaller car.It use magnetic energy,devoid of noise and air pollution,The road run of have release magnetic field high-speed train technology,Maglev. It can faster fluent driver.I am trust Volkswagen that Hover car because have a devgelop in future.  

Referanc
(Volkswagen,2012).Innovation of vehicles devoid wheel driven floating.Retrieved from https://www.sentangsedtee.com/news_detail.php?rich_id=2462

Hover Car

- What is this car name? The name of this car is Hover.

- What does it look like? It has passenger seat shaped disc,2 seat,sphere and smaller car. 

- What kind of fuel does it use? It use magnetic energy,devoid of noise and air pollution,The road run of have release magnetic field high-speed train technology,Maglev.

- How many kilometers per hour? It can faster fluent driver. 

- How much does it cost? I think the car will cost 2 million.

- What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing? (Volkswagen,2012)

- What source in the reference list that the writer used? Volkswagen,2011.Innovation of vehicles devoid wheel driven floating.Retrieved from https://www.sentangsedtee.com/news_detail.php?rich_id=2462

Pleumjit Thinkaow

         Pleumjit Thinkaow is a Thai volleyball player. Pleumjit is my favorite athlete. She is tall and white.She has a beautiful smile. Her is not only good looking but her is ability player volleyball was excellent. In her career, Pleumjit Thinkaow won Asian club championship Best Server,Best Scorer,Best Spiker,Best Blocker,Best Receiver,Best Setter,Best Digger and Miss Volleyball.Her Rolyal decorations. I like her because I love to play volleyball and I like to be a player volleyball like her. I think  Pleumjit Thinkaow was the best player volleyball.I like her.Her's Strong and Beautiful.

          

Pleumjit Thinkaow

         Pleumjit Thinkaow is a Thai volleyball player. Pleumjit is my favorite athlete. She is tall and white.She has a short black hair. Her is not only good looking but her is also very good at volleyball. In her career, Pleumjit Thinkaow won Asian club championship Best Server,Best Scorer,Best Spiker,Best Blocker,Best Receiver,Best Setter,Best Digger and Miss Volleyball.Her Rolyal decorations. I like her because I love to play volleyball. I want to be a player volleyball like her. I think  Pleumjit Thinkaow was the best player volleyball the world has ever seen.I like her.Her's Strong and Beautiful.

          

          

Favorite athlete.

            -What is his/her name? Her name is Pleumjit Thinkaow.
            - What kind of sports does he/she play? She plays volleyball very well. 

            - What does he/she look like? she is tall and white.She has a short black hair.                - What has been his/her sport success? Her won Asian club championship Best Server,Best Scorer,Best Spiker,Best Blocker,Best Receiver,Best Setter,Best Digger and Miss volleyball.Her Rolyal decorations.            

          - Why do you like him/her? I like her because I love to play volleyball. I want to be a player volleyball like her.          

          - Other information that you want to write about I think  Pleumjit Thinkaow was the best player volleyball the world has ever seen.I like her.Her's Strong and Beautiful.